"I get chased and kicked around and I feel like I've done something wrong.
I roll into a net, I feel trapped and scared.
But then the kids who play scream and cheer, I don't know what happened but somehow I feel better. My worries disappear and then I feel less bitter."
For my poem I picked the sport Soccer. I really enjoyed doing this activity, especially because l put personification sentences to make the poem better and describe the sport too.
2 comments:
Hi Richelle, In your post I liked how you firstly explained what personification is, your poem is one of a kind, how did you think of one like that. For a second, I didn't really know what it was!
Hi Richelle,
This piece of writing is very exquisite. I was very intrigued on the way you used strong vocabulary. I was very impressed on the way you had written this personification story.keep it up Richelle.
- Limi
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