Shared Writing: Archery

Shared Writing: Archery

Introduction: Angel

“Beep beep” The alarm goes off. I suddenly wake up and rushed into the bathroom. Today was the day I competed in a huge tournament against other competitors from around the world. I instantly got dressed and prepared for the most important day of my career. Once I was done, I took an huge deep breath and headed out.

Problem: Nikaya.

Only at that point that I had realise my arrows were missing, if I don’t find them I will be disqualified. My heart sunk, I can’t even think of the numerous amount of people I have disappointed, I am absolutely puzzled where they may be. I tried everything, but my last option was to, retrace where I went.

Solution: Richelle.

All of a sudden I see something in the corner of my eye. There they were my dream savers “I found them, I found them” I quietly said in my head, and It was just in time. I immediately grabbed the arrows and headed out. Whilst walking back, I grabbed my bow and headed down to the arena. I got in position and the games began.

Conclusion: Angel.

As the game had finished, I suddenly looked up towards the scoreboard and there it was 2045, I had set the world record by twenty points.

By: Nikaya, Angel, Richelle

Math: Math Strategies

Kiwi Kids News: Questions and Recall

Kiwi Kids News: Dinosaur Footprint found in Gobi Desert

Questions: (recall)

1. Who is the main person or group of people in this article?

The dinosaur footprint and the scientists.

     2. What was the key event from the news article?

The key event is when the scientist’s found the footprint

   

     3. Where did this event take place?

Gobi Desert, In Mongolia

     4. When did this event take place?

During October 2016

Share what you think about this article and explain why

I think this article is very interesting because it shows an scientist finding a real dinosaur footprint. For me I think that’s really cool because they were once roaming around the world before and now they’ve gone extinct. For me that’s really interesting and the fact that they found an actual footprint is better.

Writing: Personification

Inquiry Learning: Disaster

Figurative Language: The Colourful Rose

The rose is as colourful as the rainbow, and as beautiful as the summer beach. Its scent is as nice as a new dress, and the petals are as delicate as a baby.