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Friday, 4 November 2016

Narrative Writing: Alice

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Frozen. I stood there frozen with mixed feelings, fear and wonder. I gazed at the bizarre happenings around me. I felt dazed, as if I was stuck in an dreadful dream. I was scared like a cat.


Cards, some large and some small dance around in front of me like it had a mind of it's own. Confused but yet mesmerised, I began to make my way through the forest hoping that I made the right decision. Step by step I walk as slowly as a snail. “ERRRRR” I heard in the far distance. Chills ran down my back. My heart beat started to run fast. I stopped under a tree. I couldn’t breathe. Gasping for air I gradually started to walk slowly. I sluggishly looked around for help. “Where even am I?” I thought in my head. I looked around for ages hoping to find something but I had no luck. Suddenly I heard the eerie sound that I heard earlier. “Where do I go?”. I ran as fast as an cheetah so I could get to the other side but it was an dead end, I had nowhere to go. The sound became louder and louder and I could sense the creature coming closer. Before I knew it the creature was behind me and I slowly turned around. “CRASH” I woke up in shock. I woke up back in my room. “It was all just a bad dream?”. I got out of my bed shocked.

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